RECOUNT
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Recount an exciting event so that our reader knows what happens and how we felt.
The best day of my life!!!
When Troy went out for another race Jacob and I just went for a walk around the pits looking at other cars and in the corner of my eye I saw 19b all crushed. Jacob and I looked and said “wow!”
Jacob took me to my parents in the stands and that was the end of that.
When I got to my parents we stayed and watched the rest of the races. Troy came out for his last race of the night and he won his race. Dad and I went into the pit’s to congratulate him on his win.
When I was in the pits I could smell burnt rubber and gasoline and it was a very bad smell and it smelt like a very, very burnt sausage. Replacing the tyres was so hard because they were so heavy.
At the end of Troys races I got to sit in his car and it was full of mud I had to pick out all the very sticky mud.
This was one of the most exciting times of my life.
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